A new fic-- Wolfsbane

[mysid]

I just wrote my first story for the GloveSmack community.

Title: Wolfsbane
Summary: Remus tries a new experimental potion; Sirius worries when it doesn't seem to work correctly.
Rating: NC-17
Location: http://www.vixenette.slashcity.org/mysid/Wolfsbane1.htm

Comments

[rynne.livejournal.com]

The link's not working--do you have any other link? *wants to read the fic*

[mysid.livejournal.com]

I fixed the link. (I needed to capitalize the title--gah!) And one more time-- http://www.vixenette.slashcity.org/mysid/Wolfsbane1.htm

[rynne.livejournal.com]

Thanks. ^_^ Wouldn't want to miss out on a fic by you because of a faulty link.

[marinarusalka.livejournal.com]

Excuse me while I laugh myself silly at your icon.

[rynne.livejournal.com]

copperbadge made it. He made this one too. The man's a genius, I tell you :p.

[marinarusalka.livejournal.com]

This is excellent. You handled the gradual personality changes in Remus, and James and Sirius' reaction to them, really well. I got really tense, worrying about Remus and what he might do to himself or to Sirius. And I really liked how you tied it in to canon, with the events in the story leading Sirius to suspect Remus later.

[mysid.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's nice to know what you liked about it.

[qfapo.livejournal.com]

Hi!

Here you have someone who has read all your slash fics published in ff.net -and in another website I can't remeber right now U_U- and checked if you had a Livejournal searching for more... -with succesful results, as it's obvious ^^U-

I love your characteritzations. You get perfectly the personality of Remus' and give a very strong one to Sirius -I think you put him in-character too, but I think it's more difficult to know how Sirius was from the information given in the books than Remus-.

I really liked this fic too. You made me be afraid of Remus sometimes! And it just made sense, because it wasn't just Reamus being a beast. I think it was more as if his deepest fears and frustrations -Sirius leaving him for james, he being not able to have children- were coming to the surface and he wasn't able to control them, having lost part of his 'human side'.

I love how you write the 'wolf part' of Remus. And how Sirius manages to deal with him.

And the end... It was a good way to connect your fic with the canon. Although it broke my heart... -just as "A Picture is Worth a Thousand Lies"-.

I hope you doesn't mind me leaving reviews here to your fic without being asked to... I would have reviewed on fanfiction.net but, since this one was NC-17, I supposed you weren't going to publish it there. Anyway, I wanted to say some of this things about your fics to you, and I though it was a good chance...

Thanks!

[mysid.livejournal.com]

Yes, you're right--this one won't go up at ff.net, so your comments are welcome here.

I'm glad you think that I succeeded in keeping everyone in character--it's always a primary goal of mine. And I like what you said about this revealing Remus's insecurities rather than just being random darkness. If it had just been pure, "When I'm a wolf I want to eat people," there would have been no reason for anyone to later suspect that human-Remus might mean James harm.

[nikpt-o.livejournal.com]

Hi there!

Since qfapo has said a lot of things I wanted to say (and because she says them before me all the time XP)... I don't know what else can I say TT_TT.
I’ve also read all of your fics at fanfiction.net (and I’m on the way to read the other ones that I haven’t already read at other places) and found out your LJ yesterday.

I liked this fic very much too (yeah… I liked all of your fics but it’s not my fault… it’s yours for writing such exciting stories with characters so IC and original plots).
I was really scared of the wolf’s side of Remus; I was also worried about James but, mostly, about Sirius; because he’s the one who had to deal with Remus/wolf.
And you just give us a theory about their mistrust in Remus, about him being the traitor.

I’m, in some kind, repeating some of qfapo’s sentences but I just needed to give you my point of view (even though it’s completely useless… one does what she can, but it’s quite difficult for me to write in English ^^U). So if you don’t like me giving comments just say it, no problem at all.

Thanks!

[mysid.livejournal.com]

Ooh--I made you scared of Remus! Good! I wanted James to be scared of him, (not so much for himself but for Sirius and for his family) so it's good to know that I did succeed in making him seem dangerous.

And it's nice to know that you like my other fics as well. Your comments are always welcome.

[minywish.livejournal.com]

maybe it's to late,but-do u have another link? i really want to read this but it's not available

[mysid.livejournal.com]

I just posted this story on my own LJ so you can read it there. Thanks for asking!