mysid

Ahh . . . bliss! Don't get me wrong, I love the two drabbles you've posted recently (and I will, I *will* go and feedback the second one. Just to warn you, I'm usually one of those awful readers who greedily gobbles up the stories and then leaves absolutely no feedback, but I'm trying to do better. Emphasis on *try*) but there's nothing like having a full-fledged story to sink your teeth into. I loved the concept of the Veil of Possibilities challenge, and was disappointed that so many of the prompts never got completed, so I loved having the chance to see your take on another one of the scenarios. This story was wonderful! The interactions between the teenagers were heartbreakingly sweet, and I particularly loved the precise moment in time where you caught them: with Sirius just beginning to realize his interests lay with men instead of women, and Remus, always a bit quicker on the ball when it comes to emotional maturity, already knowing not just the gender but the identity of what his heart really wants. It was beautiful and touching and my only regret is that I don't get to see this Remus and Sirius have their happy ending! Thanks again for the wonderful story!
:-)
Em