I stumbled across this by chance, and I'm glad I read it.
This was very insightful, and I gather from the comments that one of your improvements is not making Sirius swear his undying love to Remus in the end. That's a very nice twist, and it would take him longer than that to come to terms with his own thoughts and stuff.
A thoroughly enjoyable read, and I will definitely check out the original fiction you incorporated here so nicely!
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Date: 2005-09-19 03:57 am (UTC)This was very insightful, and I gather from the comments that one of your improvements is not making Sirius swear his undying love to Remus in the end. That's a very nice twist, and it would take him longer than that to come to terms with his own thoughts and stuff.
A thoroughly enjoyable read, and I will definitely check out the original fiction you incorporated here so nicely!