Yes, you're right--this one won't go up at ff.net, so your comments are welcome here.
I'm glad you think that I succeeded in keeping everyone in character--it's always a primary goal of mine. And I like what you said about this revealing Remus's insecurities rather than just being random darkness. If it had just been pure, "When I'm a wolf I want to eat people," there would have been no reason for anyone to later suspect that human-Remus might mean James harm.
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Thanks!
Date: 2004-06-07 09:06 am (UTC)I'm glad you think that I succeeded in keeping everyone in character--it's always a primary goal of mine. And I like what you said about this revealing Remus's insecurities rather than just being random darkness. If it had just been pure, "When I'm a wolf I want to eat people," there would have been no reason for anyone to later suspect that human-Remus might mean James harm.