Drabble: Zephyr

[mysid]

This week's prompt at sirius_remus100 is "Severus Snape." Somehow, I wrote a drabble using the prompt without giving Snape a major role.



Title: Zephyr
Author: mysid
Word Count: 100
Prompt: Severus Snape
Rating: PG

Remus suddenly broke away from his classmates and chased a parchment stolen by a playful gust of wind. He bent forward as the parchment neared the ground, only to have the parchment swirl forward again.

"Aha!" Remus crowed triumphantly as he stepped on the runaway and bent down to retrieve it. Sirius appreciated the way the wind wrapped Remus's robe—thin and soft from too many washings—tightly around his legs and arse. When Remus turned back with a smile, Sirius quickly looked away, afraid of being caught staring.

"That git Snape is staring at Remus," Peter muttered. "Wonder why."
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Comments

[westwardlee.livejournal.com]

I bet you Snape will pay for the effrontery - how dare he stare at Remus like that?

Cute drabble.

[yodels.livejournal.com]

I love the image of Remus chasing a parchment in the wind. Lovely.

[kawaii-tenshi27.livejournal.com]

::is very tempted to say 'great minds think alike' but decides against it:: Lovely, m'dear!

[pforte.livejournal.com]

Very good. I like the possibilities and can almost see Sirius planning some sort of revenge.

[emnorth.livejournal.com]

LOL!!! No one does obliviousness like the marauders. So cute!
:-)
Em

[marinliliz.livejournal.com]

Peter's innocence is sweet. And I really like that being the prompt, Severus, he is only mentioned briefly, although with greater consequences if Sirius heard Peter's muttered words. I fear for Severus.