A new fic-- Wolfsbane

[mysid]

I just wrote my first story for the GloveSmack community.

Title: Wolfsbane
Summary: Remus tries a new experimental potion; Sirius worries when it doesn't seem to work correctly.
Rating: NC-17
Location: http://www.vixenette.slashcity.org/mysid/Wolfsbane1.htm

Comments

[nikpt-o.livejournal.com]

Hi there!

Since qfapo has said a lot of things I wanted to say (and because she says them before me all the time XP)... I don't know what else can I say TT_TT.
I’ve also read all of your fics at fanfiction.net (and I’m on the way to read the other ones that I haven’t already read at other places) and found out your LJ yesterday.

I liked this fic very much too (yeah… I liked all of your fics but it’s not my fault… it’s yours for writing such exciting stories with characters so IC and original plots).
I was really scared of the wolf’s side of Remus; I was also worried about James but, mostly, about Sirius; because he’s the one who had to deal with Remus/wolf.
And you just give us a theory about their mistrust in Remus, about him being the traitor.

I’m, in some kind, repeating some of qfapo’s sentences but I just needed to give you my point of view (even though it’s completely useless… one does what she can, but it’s quite difficult for me to write in English ^^U). So if you don’t like me giving comments just say it, no problem at all.

Thanks!

[mysid.livejournal.com]

Ooh--I made you scared of Remus! Good! I wanted James to be scared of him, (not so much for himself but for Sirius and for his family) so it's good to know that I did succeed in making him seem dangerous.

And it's nice to know that you like my other fics as well. Your comments are always welcome.