BWAHAHAHAHA! I love it. Remus makes the perfect Sue, really. Actually, Sirius would too, lol. I loved the "sparks" conversation, and Remus's choice of school to transfer to, and his hilarious line of reasoning for it. Loved Gary Stu snogging Sirius. Figures he'd choose Sirius. Loved the "visions". You got so many of the cliches, lol. Are you working on the sequel, or is it still open?